Alicia Chapter 13.6: Bell Branch Troubles – Meeting the New King
Azhure: A bunch of things happened like my country’s Independence Day and I’m mostly staring at the screen figuring out what to rewrite. Anyway, enjoy. (more…)
Azhure: A bunch of things happened like my country’s Independence Day and I’m mostly staring at the screen figuring out what to rewrite. Anyway, enjoy. (more…)
Azhure: This should be fast to rewrite, just action scenes. (more…)
During the first time that Alicia met Rose and Jill, Alicia was showing photos on her smartphone to Rose and Jill. (more…)
Researcher: Dr. Amelia Rickens
Subject: Alicia Bell (‘volunteer’)
Test: How Orders are affected when using loyal maneg instead of disloyal maneg.
Azhure: I just got off a cruise ship after college exams (last month was absolutely full), and I can’t believe how hard I tried to be dark and edgy in my high school years. (more…)
Azhure: The interlude’s fine, I’m not touching it. Also, it’s that time of the year again.
Azhure: I don’t know what to subtitle this sub-chapter.
Voice: At least it ain’t just ‘Conflict,’ ‘Conflict,’ ‘Conflict’! (more…)
an: I literally have no idea on writing this interlude, I wanted to make a school chapter and then I was watching Cardcaptor Sakura and see the episode where there is a student fair and the Cinderella play with reversed gender roles and I was like ‘that’s it!’. (more…)
Azhure: Alright, this is going to be the first part of chapter 13 rewritten under a new title to boot. Frankly, I should have done this much earlier – I’m practically cringing myself reading what past me thought was a cool idea.
Voice: Yeah!
Azhure: I’ll keep the same number of sub-chapters as the original to make it less of a headache for me to upload the rewrites, so expect them to be longer than usual. Also, I’ll tweak Alicia Chapter 19 to reflect some of the changes I’ve made to this chapter. Enjoy. (more…)
Azhure: Turns out, this is a second rewrite. Well, I still have to add more stuff to make the other rewrites sense.
Voice: Now half of the chapter is in italics!
Azhure: Anyway, I’m not splitting rewrites anymore ’cause rearranging chapters on some sites is a nightmare. (more…)