Azhure: Alright, this is going to be the first part of chapter 13 rewritten under a new title to boot. Frankly, I should have done this much earlier – I’m practically cringing myself reading what past me thought was a cool idea.

Voice: Yeah!

Azhure: I’ll keep the same number of sub-chapters as the original to make it less of a headache for me to upload the rewrites, so expect them to be longer than usual. Also, I’ll tweak Alicia Chapter 19 to reflect some of the changes I’ve made to this chapter. Enjoy. (more…)