(Final) Alicia Chapter 21.2: The Choice – Advice
Azhure: Yesterday, as of this chapter’s upload, I added ‘critical fixes’ to the previous chapter which clarifies Alicia’s problem being a passive listener.
Azhure: Yesterday, as of this chapter’s upload, I added ‘critical fixes’ to the previous chapter which clarifies Alicia’s problem being a passive listener.
Azhure: This is it, the final part of this chapter. Thank you for reading thus far.
Voice: And now I will what you will do to her…
Azhure: Oh, and I noticed the plothole in chapter 11 due to changing Darc with Will which will setback this chapter until part 2, so I revised the former.
Voice: Huh..? Wait! You’re going to- (more…)
Azhure: And more lore stuff regarding Alicia.
Voice: … (more…)
The noble has watched the battle and gave a speech to the rest of his army shaken by your arrival. Whatever he said, it boosted their morale and went back to their barracks to prepare something. (Miriel) (more…)
“W-What in the Black Mist is this!?” In the backline, another rifleman exclaimed, others looked at what got their fellow rifleman so spooked: the beheaded corpses of their men. (more…)
Azhure: I’m much more comfortable writing straightforward fight scenes. Plus some lore. (more…)
Azhure: Recent events in my private life made me insensible if I uploaded yesterday as scheduled. (more…)
Azhure: After three weeks of only achieving 5k words (3k words in the three parts of Chapter 20.4 and 2k words in More About the Otherworldly Court 5 (in my WordPress site)) I should be back to normal writing volume.
Voice: …
Azhure: Not saying anything, Voice? Well, Enjoy.
Azhure: Rewriting it a bit to make it less cringe after rereading it to write the latest memory. (more…)
Azhure: This is the second part of this chapter. It’s the first time writing scenes like this. I’m not rushing things so the final part will be next week.
Btw, I’m also writing a More About the Otherworldly Court chapter. (more…)