Alicia Chapter 21.2: The Choice – Advice
Azhure: Yesterday, as of this chapter’s upload, I added ‘critical fixes’ to the previous chapter which clarifies Alicia’s problem being a passive listener.
Azhure: Yesterday, as of this chapter’s upload, I added ‘critical fixes’ to the previous chapter which clarifies Alicia’s problem being a passive listener.
Azhure: With that, I have rewritten the first twelve chapters. The note after this chapter will explain why I did so. And with that, this is the end… part one.
Azhure: This is it, the final part of this chapter. Thank you for reading thus far.
Voice: And now I will what you will do to her…
Azhure: Oh, and I noticed the plothole in chapter 11 due to changing Darc with Will which will setback this chapter until part 2, so I revised the former.
Voice: Huh..? Wait! You’re going to- (more…)
The noble has watched the battle and gave a speech to the rest of his army shaken by your arrival. Whatever he said, it boosted their morale and went back to their barracks to prepare something. (Miriel) (more…)
“W-What in the Black Mist is this!?” In the backline, another rifleman exclaimed, others looked at what got their fellow rifleman so spooked: the beheaded corpses of their men. (more…)
Azhure: I’m much more comfortable writing straightforward fight scenes. Plus some lore. (more…)
Azhure: Another lore piece that you need to read. Still tied to the story. (more…)
Azhure: Recent events in my private life made me insensible if I uploaded yesterday as scheduled. (more…)
Azhure: After three weeks of only achieving 5k words (3k words in the three parts of Chapter 20.4 and 2k words in More About the Otherworldly Court 5 (in my WordPress site)) I should be back to normal writing volume.
Voice: …
Azhure: Not saying anything, Voice? Well, Enjoy.
Azhure: Rewriting it a bit to make it less cringe after rereading it to write the latest memory. (more…)